Reviews: 14
Amathyst – 18 Feb. 2010
AWE its Paul's soft side, I'm writing one about him too! It's really good.
CutiePie – 16 Aug. 2009
Awww, it's over?! That was really good. I've never seen this side of Paul before... he really does have a soft side.
Kiefergirl24 – 30 Jul. 2009
wow alyster
GarlicTShirt – 4 Jan. 2009
Yay! I found it, Aly! I loved it, too! Thanks for writing this!
Emma – 25 Aug. 2008
Hm... don't know if I'm gona take back what I said.. I saw somthing on here that may have changed my mind about this story and the author... nah.
Things are the way they are. Can't do much about it...
If someone wants to remove this, feel free. I thought when I first started to write this review that I would say something different about this story then what have written below but I changed my mind.
So don't mind me...
Emma – 24 Aug. 2008
Just want to say that this story doesn't suck. Sorry. It is an ok story.
You have to let go and move on even though it hurts.
Looking forward to more stories with you Alyster. You are a good writer.
I like your fics with Davd and company. :)
Hoping for an update on your story with Amy soon.
:)
Emma
AquaAnimus – 22 Aug. 2008
I liked that part with Star too. Hhahah! :) So David. Yep, thats our Davey Gravy!!!!
PythonPrincess – 22 Aug. 2008
“Let her die,” David ordered. “We don’t need another Star in there.”
BWHAAHAHAH! No kidding!
PythonPrincess – 22 Aug. 2008
WooHoo! Wonderful job, Aly! Paul is so sweet with her..and Naughty Dwayne!! Hahah! I'll have to spank him.....And Max got his butt kicked! Yeah! He needs it! And I loved all the little character quirks you tossed in!
Emma – 22 Aug. 2008
Bad girls! *shows vampire face*
This story SUCKS
The orginal is better. Aly you don't understand... you want to ease my pain and talk, e-mail me, if not... just ignore me as you have been the last few days since I'm so bad.
Last: I am NOT WHINING just trying to not lose a friend! wich I understand now that I have... *whispers* godbye lost boys... godbye world...
AquaAnimus – 21 Aug. 2008
Emma, go away! No one wants to read your whiny rants on HERE! This is Aly's story and its very very good!
AquaAnimus – 21 Aug. 2008
Story didnt hurt me! It gave me warm fuzzy feelings. :P
Emma – 20 Aug. 2008
This was intresting to say the least... I do regonize this story... hm...
well it was intresting to read it with Paul as a character instead of...
The story works both well.
oh, and I should mention that this hurt but I think you allready now that.
I like the orignal story best but this also a good story.
AquaAnimus – 20 Aug. 2008
ooh hot stuff! great writing. I loved the story! Paul is such a sweetie!